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statement of intent VIDEO

The health drink my advert will contain is Naked. My original slogan I will be using is "Unlock your inner taste buds, Imbibe Naked" My aim is to advertise my drink as something which can help you stay healthy. I plan to meet my brief of two 40-60 second advert by having young characters who are 15 and 16..In my first advert the narrative will be a girl (me) scrolling on tiktok trying to find a new drink she can try to help her stay on track of being healthy. I think my first advert is good at targeting the target audience because it is relatable .In my second advert it will be me and my friend working out and she will have more energy than me and then she will recommend me the drink. Then from this I will try it and I will see that the drink gives me a booster of energy to help me to work out .In my two adverts I will use a pack shot in both of them to show off my product .I will also use long shots + medium close up shots to show off my characters facial expressions which w...

Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response

  Create a new blogpost called ‘Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response’ and then copy in the feedback below. Complete the learner response task below the feedback. WWW: Your editing skills are really very good here – lots to credit. Excellent continuity editing, clear narrative communicated, and an attempt at a pack product shot at the end of the advert. You were able to film a lot in the allocated time during our lesson – good time management displayed. EBI: The preliminary exercise advert length was between 30-40 seconds and yours is well over, not a problem for our real coursework but ensure you meet the minimum requirements.  In terms of the editing, the main feedback from this project is the audio. The section where the conversation takes place needs to be louder. The product pack shot is too fast, and I am not sure the typography and colour make it appealing or links to the product enough. You can also see the background of the white pop-up screen which makes...

End of Year 1 exam: Learner Response

  1) Type up any feedback from your teacher in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). Grade-6 WWW-A strong exam with some great points.Well done! EBI-Timing/exam technique to cover both csp in detail for the 20 mark essay 2) Look at the mark scheme document linked above. Question 1.1 asks about mise-en-scene. What do we use to remember mise-en-scene? Give one example answer from the mark scheme too. Examples: • Will’s costume – makes him look like he is from our world • The two children they are chasing – costume and make-up to make them look abandoned/homeless. 3) Question 1.2 asks about narrative features in the extract. Look at the mark scheme to pick out  three  possible answers for this question.  • Location: the empty city creates its own enigma code with the mystery of what has happened to the city and the people that lived there. This is partially resolved later in the extract. • Props: the setting and props are both familiar (the d...

Paper 1 assessment learner response

 1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). WWW-ABLE TO IDENTIFY DIFFERENT NARRATIVE FEATURES RELATION TO THE GALAXY ADVERT CSP  EBI-NOT ENOUGH SPECIFIC EXAMPLES FOR THE OTHER NAMED CSP:TATLER OR BLACK WIDOW.DO NOT DESCRIBE THE CSP ANALYSE INSTED. 2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify  three  points that you could have referred to in your answer. • Verbal codes • Use of language • Colour palette • Photographic codes. 3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main  narrative theories  and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP.  -PROPPS CHARACTER THEORY -TODEROLVS THEORY OF EQUILIBRIM -BINARY OPPOSITIONS 4) Now look at Question 4 - Tatler and social/cultural contexts. Use the mark scheme to identify  three  points you could have made in y...